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Ruthenium 101 by ~arachibutyrophobic:iconarachibutyrophobic:

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©2007-2009 ~arachibutyrophobic
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something i did a while ago for my chemistry teacher. just random facts about ruthenium ... number 44 on the period table.

my first ever comic type thing. done in pencil and outlined with a weird dried out pen, then scanned. i tried to do stuff to it in photoshop but failed miserably. :) will try again.

lots of critique please! :sun:

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~oh-no-its-jesus May 4, 2007, 5:31:49 PM
I understand that it's for chemistry, but I think if it were a real comic you wouldn't get many readers because everything about it, from the layout to the too -much narration, is much too chaotic.

I do like the art though. :)

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By the pricking of my thumbs,
Something wicked this way comes:
Open, locks,
Whoever knocks!
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~ugurerbas May 5, 2007, 1:46:54 PM
Heeeeyy :) nice work

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~arachibutyrophobic May 5, 2007, 3:10:38 PM
thank you! any "advanced critique"?

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Comedy is a funny way of being serious.
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~arachibutyrophobic May 5, 2007, 3:13:09 PM
thanks for the comment. i ended up putting numbers in the corners of the boxes just to help myself from getting confused. :( how would you fix the chaotic-ness if you needed to keep it all in one page?

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Comedy is a funny way of being serious.
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~oh-no-its-jesus May 5, 2007, 5:57:34 PM
I think the numbers would help. I'd also say, adding a bit of color- not a lot, just enough to point out the important parts- would make it better.

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~arachibutyrophobic May 5, 2007, 6:39:17 PM
i will try that on ps. thx!

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Comedy is a funny way of being serious.
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~ugurerbas May 6, 2007, 4:10:25 AM
Hmmm. There is no black and white effect. Maybe you used some black. For example [link]

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Rhino
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~arachibutyrophobic May 6, 2007, 6:02:15 PM
i see what you mean. what does cemen mean? and new avatar! it's cool. :D

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Comedy is a funny way of being serious.
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~ugurerbas May 7, 2007, 3:04:10 AM
Cemen is kind of spices sauce :) and new avatar: Im feeling like rhinoceros these days :D

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Rhino
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~arachibutyrophobic May 7, 2007, 6:09:51 PM
... ok, i guess everyone feels different "these days". :sun:

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Comedy is a funny way of being serious.
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